I wonder what would happen if I bumped into a table while I was riding my bike inside with drinks and food on it?
Bang there goes me,falling of my bed while I´m getting ready to go to Mcdonalds to met my friends Hayley,Lita,Shanae and Adelaide. First I go for a shower get changed, brush my teeth, get my keys and lock the house and start walking but as I start walking i look into my bag and try to find my Phone and my wallet, but then I noticed that I left them in my room on the top of my cabinet. So then I quickly run in and grab my phone and wallet, but as I run back out to lock the house I check what the time was and was nearly 8.00am in the morning. Then I quickly waved down a taxi and the taxi looked very interesting because the taxi color purple and pink with zebra patterns on the sides and polka dots on the top. So I said ¨no thanks I can wait for another taxi.¨ I said surprisingly. While I was waiting I waved another car which looked similar to a limo so I hopped into the car. I did not eve have to pay for the ride. When I hopped out my friends were looking at me with a very unknown facial. But when I walked inside, everyone in the restaurant looked at me like I was royal or famous.
please comment down bellow What could I do at the end of the story? and what could I add in to my wacky story?
Thursday, July 5, 2018
I wonder what would happen if I bumped into a table while I was riding my bike inside with drinks and food on it? By Cyrus
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Some good adverbs used here Cyrus. You seem to have had fun writing this.
ReplyDeletenext time you could add even more time order phrases like, 'Seconds later...' 'Just as she...'
Well done:)